"Elon Musk kind of turned out to be an asshole and I don't want to be driving a car built and designed by an asshole. So, uh, looking forward to my new ride."
    • TallonMetroid@lemmy.worldEnglish
      14·
      23 hours ago

      “Senator Elon Musk” is ambiguous phrasing. Obviously, what is meant is “Senator [that] Elon Musk”, but it could also have been calling Aparthiedman himself a senator.

      • Mr_Dr_Oink@lemmy.world
        5·
        22 hours ago

        It reads like a gardenpath sentence.

        For example (made up on the spot so excuse me if its crap)

        Muscle man made harms others when using force

        [Muscle that was made by man]

    • xmunk@sh.itjust.works
      13·
      23 hours ago

      Elon Musk isn’t a Senator. The title as written reads that way by default.

      A that shoved in the middle would fix that.

    • Darkassassin07@lemmy.caEnglish
      7·
      23 hours ago

      Senator Elon Musk Called a ‘Traitor’ Gets Rid of His Tesla: Don’t Want a Car Built By An ‘A**hole’

      This sounds like Elon is a Senator and was called a traitor; when it was actually Musk calling a Senator a traitor.

      Try:

      Senator, who was called a ‘Traitor’ by Elon Musk, Gets Rid of His Tesla: Don’t Want a Car Built By An ‘A**hole’